Senin, 24 Oktober 2011

“A Love In Crying”

When I’m coming in there
You are so unhappy
There is no light in your eyes
Any tears, empty glad

I hope there is sunshine in your eyes
Althought,,,rain,,,crying

I want you is happy with me
I will try to give a Love
A Love in crying

Do you remember when we were walking in the garden?
Flower garden in last Desember
Do you remember it?

When we saw a moonlight in dark night
You had face fill of love with me
Smile with you tears, forever


puisi di atas diambil dari “Writing Class” pertemuan kedua semester 3
Created by: Rustyn Mawar Biru
NB: setelah mengalami koreksi oleh dosen,,,Miss Yeni Rahmawati
dengan sedikit coretan merah karena kesalahan struktur kata2nya,
namun anehnya dapet “NICE” di bawahnya..
thank you,miss,,I will try to be better again..

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